Here's part two. No one's commented yet. PLEASE say something, even if you didn't like it (I'm actually being honest about this - I'd like to know someone bothered to read it). Enjoy!
First comment! THANKTYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!!!
It was supposed to be making fun of teen girl manga (the cheap drawings, happy-go-lucky plots, love triangles, etc), but it just turned out kinda cutsey-pie. *shrugs*